初中英语作文《I love my school》评析
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I love my school
My school is very big with several tall e are about 800 students in it have a big playground with a lot trees around summer ,there are all kinds of flowers everywhere. We have a lot of fun at school. During the breaks,we play games and do sports,such as playing basketball, football and table tennis. All of us students can study hard, obey the school rules ,take care of the school environment. There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. The teachers in the school are kind to us just like our my heart, the school is like a big family. I like my school and feel proud of it.
1.文章书写形式不规范,希望注意。
2.“there are …”句首字母要大写。应改为.“There are …”.
school is very big with several tall buildings.“with”用得恰到好处。
e are many interesting activities for us to take part in. 运用了不定式作后置定语,很好。
my heart, the school is like a big family. 比喻恰当。
文章语句连贯、流畅,句意完整,能利用较复杂的'句式结构表达思想,基本功扎实、雄厚。不足之处在今后学习中要注意标点符号及字母大小写等细微问题。
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