SAT写作修改讲解实例
来源:才华咖 本文已影响2.72W人
来源:才华咖 本文已影响2.72W人
学生习作2:(基础一般,笔者把文章拆成了五部分,分别点评)
Some failed experiences are useful for us.
一 myself for as an example. I played tennis at the age of eight. When I was eleven years old, I took part in a Sports Meeting about tennis which was organized by Jiangsu Province, a province in the southeast of China. 1At the beginning of the group match I had won two opponents, but my third opponent, Hu, who was in the Jiangsu 2provinciances team, defeated me. The score was 1:6 and 2:6. At the end of our match, he held out his thumb to the ground and said, Loser! You cannot win forever!
I could not forget it after the match, though I would have another doubles match the next day.
分析:
the first group stage
incial team 省队
二.1 His words reverberated unceasingly nearby my ear, even in mine dream.
The next day, I could not focus on the match. At the beginning of the match, the score was 1:4.
2 What are you doing? My partner shouted at me while his hand knocked at my head and his arm winded around my shoulder. You shouldnt pay attention to your failure that was something in the past. And you must focus on this match now! He shouted. At last, we won the match and got the prize of 6th that year.
Spring+MyBatis数据读写分离的实例详解
Unit 8 Sports Stars的教学实录及反思案例
JavaScript中的style.cssText使用教程分解
javascript闭包的介绍理解和讲解实例
JavaScript实例讲解
关于SAT作文的实例讲解
javascript 单例模式详解及简单实例
javascript解析json实例
Javascript实例教程如何使用HoTMetal
iOS8.3越狱后修复Cydia Substrate不兼容问题解决方法
SAT真题作文修改实例
5月SAT作文的实例讲解
SAT作文写作实例讲解
SAT作文实例讲解
SAT短篇阅读实例讲解
SAT写作例子的准备方法
Javascript中arguments对象的详解和使用方法
英语报纸解读:Data may disrupt a peculiar business大纲
关于JavaScript中isPrototypeOf函数作用和使用实例
SAT写作范例
使用matlab和Java作闭合多边形图例题讲解
关于SAT写作技巧分享实例篇
SAT真题详解与SAT作文分类
美国SAT考试改革详解
Java中的MessageFormat.format用法实例
超人的真实人生英语SAT写作例子
Javascript实例教程
java struts常见错误以及原因解析
修改简历实用技巧
Javasocket应用实例
java之this关键字用法事例解析
关于阅读理解Passage two的六级深度讲义
SAT写作例子
解答SAT改进句子题的方法
讲解PAT配置「实例」
SAT写作模板
雅思作文修改例解
Photoshop精细修改茶杯PS实例教程
css实现的tab切换效果实例
讲解静态NAT配置「实例」